Amnesia
Ch.1
The Beginning
A light shined brightly in my eyes.I sat up.I saw many people,but I didn't know who they were.Their pictures are in my mind yet I can't reconize them.I look around to see if i'm in the future.I know the items around me."You're awake!" an old woman says.She apparently was my mother.I had amnesia.My name is Amanda.The people introduce themselves and me.I'm 11in 6th grade at Besha Elm.I have long wavy brown hair and hazel eyes.They say i'm starting school tomorrow.At least I remember what that is.
Ch.2
Some School
I walk into the strange looking school that is Besha Elm.My mom tells me where my classroom is.I step in front of the room staring at the childrens' faces,trying to remember some of them."Class,this is Amanda.Please give her a warm welcome for she just recovered from amnesia." my teacher said."But we already know her Mrs.Emen!"Her name popped into my head the moment I heard her.Sinfeia was the snotty one.She was only nice to 'the group' and got good grades by cheating off others.She glared at me.I glared back.Someone jumped up but seemed to suddenly be flung up in the air when she started bouncing."Mrs.Emen!Mrs.Emen!Since I am Amanda's best friend can I be the one to help her around the school????" "Okay Jenessa but let Patrick help to.He has no friends and he could 'hang' with you guys." She said 'hang' in a wierd sort of way."It's Jen."I sat down between Jen and Patrick.Pat seemed to look at me with big,longing eyes.That will be my nick-name for him,Pat."Hi,"I said.He blinked twice then turned to his paper.I could see he was doodling,and quite exelently."Nice drawings."I said.Suddenly the teacher yelled at me for talking in class.
Ch.3
The New Genaeration
Lunch now.I can't leave Jen and Patrick,but I don't want to anyway.I don't know anyone else.We sit down."Hey Pat,talk to Amanda,will ya?You haven't spoken all day."Patrick didn't repley.I looked down at my lasanya,which was a bubbling red glop.I try some.It's amazingly delishous."Come oooooooon!What you CHICKEN?!"Suddenly Patrick stood up and glared down at Jen."I AM NOT A CHICKEN YOU HEAR ME!NOW LET ME EAT IN PEACE!"He sighed and sat down.Everyones' attention was at us.I looked at him.He suddenly blushed."Sorry." He wispered.
Ch.4
If Only I Love Ya Tomorrow
My second day with amnesia.It's hard since I forgot some of my lessons.Sinfeia stopped me in the hall."Hey teachers pet!You getting an apple?"The group of girls around her giggled."I am not a teachers pet!I'm as hyper as ever!"I realy am hyper but right now i'm shy since I don't know anyone."You are SO a teachers pet,look at yourself!"She was right.My hands were crossed with a pencil in the middle,very nerdy."Hey stop picking on her!"It was Jen and Patrick to the rescue.Jen stepped up.She leaned her face way close to hers,their noses almost touched.Then she said in a calm voice "Run.NOW!!"She pointed and they fled immedietly."Thanks guys."I said thankfully."No prob."
We headed to class."Since Amanda has forgotten most of the lessons we will cancle the big test for a review."The class cheered and thanked me."Everyone knows reviews are breaks for people who payed attention,"a classmate said.I was happy for fitting in even with amnesia and I learned everything I needed for the test.It seemed like everything was going my way.
Ch.5
Not Going My Way
After almost everyone aced the test, me and Jen and Pat walked home together."Do you remember the Old House?" Jen said. "No," I replied,"What is it?" Jen and Pat just stared at me. "An old house of course! "Jen said." I mean whats so important about it!" I guess I also forgot what sarcasem was."It is this old house that is really spooky.You can only see it at night but if you go in and dont get out before day light,your trapped with the ghosts that haunt it until it appears again." Pat repleyed.I try to imagaine it when suddenly I felt a sharp pain in my chest. "Are you ok?" Jen asks. "Theres something," I began, "That my brain doesn't want me to remember.I think it has to do something with how I got amnesia." "Oh,this is my house.See you tommorrow!"Pat walked away."Wait a second...if we are next door nieghbors and he got out there..." We were a few feet away from are house.We start jumping in the air squealing but I didn't even know why. "We are next door neighbors with Pat!!!!" We look into his window to see him staring at us funny.We walk to our houses whistling.
Ch.6
The Nightmare
I had a horrible dream last night.I was walking through this strange house,when suddenly I look up and...I wake up.Each night I get farther and farther into this dream.It's trying to tell me something,something I don't want to remember.Yet mystery is compelling.I think this dream has to do with something from my old life.I wonder...
The phone rings,interupting my thought.It's Jen. "Hey Amanda!You know what IIIIIIIIIIII found ouuuuuuuuuut!!??It's something about Paaaaaaaaaat!" Little did I know what was going to happen next. "He LIKES you!And I mean like like!" THUMP!I'm down for the count. "Amanda?Amanda?I heard something.You okay?" The phone hung over the table from it's swirling wire.I get a vision and my thought back.It's the Old House,and I just remembered the way.
Ch.7
Uncertainty Devuoers Us All
The bell rings.I try to avoid Jen and Pat today.My head is taking controll of my gutt,and now it's cowering in the corner chained up,screaming, "NO IT'S NOT IT!DON'T DO IT!" My plan fails as they run up to me."Hey you tring to ditch us or something?"Jen was always nosey like that,since she read Sherlock Holmes,as I remembered last night."I need to do something on my own."I sounded like a zombie.Once again my gutt screams. "Tell us,we'll help." This is why I don't let my head take controll. "No you won't!" I push her to the ground.I will never forgive myself.I ran away into the forest.As I approched the Old House Pat came running. "What are you doing?" He look fraintic. "I need to do this." "What?" He looked at me with those eyes saying 'please'. "I need to see inside this house." My brain was still trying to get the ducktape off his mouth to shout 'STOP!'. "Then I will go with you,"he gulped,"I won't let you get hurt."As we walked through the door,my gutt screamed"DON'T DO IT!!!PLEASE LISTEN! "I wanted to go back,but I couldn't.A creepy door and a spiral stair case stood before me. "The stairs." I said in a zombie like voice.Pat followed my lead,looking doutful and scared.We climbed the stairs as they groaned with an ecense of danger.Dust filled the air at every step.When we got up there were two doors ahead,one left and another right.As I got closer to the left my gutt shrieked and my side split in pain,meaning it was the door I was looking for.I turn the knob...
Ch.8
Death Secne
The room had no floor,just a giant hole.As I looked down,I saw eyes.Without knowing I jumped.Pat jumped with me and cuaght me in mid-air.As we landed,I could feel a presence.Suddenly the room filled up with light and we found ourselves in a storage room.Boxes were piled from wall to wall.Pat looked at me with a worried look.I could tell he thought we were in danger.We heard something growl.He held me tight."Amanda,I think this will be the only chance I will be able to do this"He grabbed me by the arms and...Suddenly red eyes flashed from behind a box.Something pounced.My gutt finally broke free and yelled "THIS IS HOW YOU GOT AMNESIA IN THE FIRST PLACE!"What I saw next was brutle.Pat got in front of me."I said I wouldn't let you get hurt!"He was knocked to the ground.I saw a liquid spread across the floor.Blood.I ran to him.Red eyes stared at me from uptop of Patrick.It leaped toward me,but when your scared your body does things on it's own.I leaped out of harms way,grabbed Patrick and started climbing boxes.The boxes reached the top of the room,though I was on the oppisite side of the open door.As I jumped across the giant hole,my foot knocked all the boxes down tumbling into the monster's lair.I ran out of that house and into the woods,where I set Patrick down.
Ch.9
Romance In A Horror Movie
Pat opened his eyes and slowly grasped my arm.Tears were rolling down my cheeks.In a soft wisper he said"I think this is the time."Then slowly he pulled me down to his level.Our lips touched.My heart pounded.As the lock relesed,I looked into his eyes.They were in pain.So was mine.I picked him up once again,when half way to the hostpital we both fainted.As we lay unconcious on the side walk,a little tune echoed through my head."Bodies and blood.Bodies and blood.This incident can't be undone.Lieing stiches in your head.Now I think the bride be dead.Tears and sweat but conclution yet,bride and groom who never knew,just how the story ends.Always saying thats the end."
Ch.10
Unexspected Ending
I open my eyes.My amnesia has gone.I remember everything from my old memories to my new ones.Last time I was awake I was nearly dead on the sidewalk so I must be at the hostpital,right?I try to look around but my head doesn't move.Nothing does.I'm completly numb.Then my eyes adjust to the light color in front of me.I'm in ice.I am frozen.Thanks a lot no good parents.They knew I was alive and they froze me!But now that I'm alive I might freeze to death...Oh my god I need to get out of here!I shake and shake and shake.A shiver runs down my spine.I stop.The ice shatters and I fall to the floor.The last thing I see before my death is the frightened, horrible look on Patricks frozen face.My last words:"I wish someone could die happy for once."All goes black...
Ch.11
Theres Another Chapter???
Jen wakes from being on the ground.She rubbs her cheek and takes a look at her hand hand.Blood."What was the last thing I heard again?"she thought.~"She's going torwards the Old House!""Thats what Pat said.I need to find them, before it's to late!"
She ran torwards the old house, but before she got there she spotted a trail of blood."What would Sherlock Holms do?"she said to herself."Thats it!Follow it!"She followed the trail of blood until she saw both of them,Amanda and Patrick,on the ground in a puddle of red.Tears rolled down.She quickly took out her cell phone(which made her feel worse because it was a Christmas present from now dead Amanda with HER picture on the screen)and speed dailed Amanda's house."Hello?"Amanda's mom said on the other line."You gott'a see this."
"Oh dear God!"Amanda's parents cry when they see the bodies,now with Jen's help in the hostpital."The pulse isn't good."said the doctor.Both of them were fading fast.Beep,beep,bepbepbepbepbeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep.Gone.Beep.A steady pulse again.Thats the third time they came alive and scared us to death."If you put them in ice they will live into the feture as long as they don't wake up."The doctor suggested."ANYTHING FOR MY LITTLE BABY!"Said both Patrick's and Amanda's mom at once.The dads slowly nodded their heads.Patricks little brother was crying.Maybe if I cryed to,Jen thought,they'll come back for good.Everyone else must have thought that to.
As they got lowered into their icy coffins,Jen thought she saw Amanda wince.Maybe a blink from inside the eyelid.Before she could say anything,they were frozen.















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LOOK AT MY SASUKE HAIRDO CONTEST![link]
Yaaty(yay-tea) means:super yay
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As you know Anko love sweets. Let's see how mey calories she gained in the chunin exam. Calories in 1 stick of dango= about 120 kcal, 53 sticks= 6360 kcal + calories in one cup of oshiruko= about 370 kcal.
A total of 6730 kcal.
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